Believe me, it's scary having others review your work. So please as a new author criticize my work if it helps. I do not expect all positive reviews and as a writer, it cannot be helped. People will condemn your work, they will put you in the corner that will be a hard setback. Nonetheless, dust of the negative comments and continue. Keep your pen and screen moving. Maintain one idea in mind there is no guaranteed that everyone will appreciate your work. At this point, it's not just a book that is published. It's your masterpiece.
"I have not failed. I’ve just found 10,000 ways that won’t work.” - Thomas A. Edison I admire this. What's your count on?
*Do what you love guys. I cannot stress that enough, you will find something that works!*
The Sun does not Rise for Wealth or Fame
Whatever you inspire to be, its a long journey. The only question is, are you rising solely for the wealth?